It's been a long, long time since I've contributed to this forum. It's been a very, very busy year – overwhelmingly so. Ironically, I was reading Tom's Wednesday post about how often we consider making policy based on what's best for our kids today, and "walla" (as my students write – because they don't know it's actually a French word spelled "voila"), I saw the persuasive prompt for the 10th-grade HSPE. It turns out they also write prompts without considering what's best for our kids.
I teach English 10th-graders at a low-income, high-needs school, so we have spent a considerable amount time preparing for this test. As you all know, one of the keys to getting kids involved in their own education is making it relevant to them. Thus, I was absolutely appalled at the prompt the kids were given to write about. It was relevant to… well… my husband who works in the security field. Included in the prompt was a new type of technology with an appellation of ambiguous language, including the word "tag."
First of all, a persuasive prompt on a high-stakes test should be about an issue with which students are familiar. The purpose is to give them a topic with which to show their skill. One sitting is not enough time to think about an issue for the first time and be able to develop convincing and persuasive arguments – particularly if a large number of our students have no idea what the topic is in the first place. The word “tag” is already ambiguous, as the kids might understand it in the context of price “tags,” name "tags," dog “tags,” graffiti “tags,” clothing brand “tags.”
With the high number of ELL students and students living in poverty at my school, there were many students who were completely confounded in how to approach this prompt. While some of our more creative students were able to “make up” enough details to complete their essays, others were completely and utterly discouraged when this unrealistic prompt was coupled with the enormous pressure they were already experiencing because of the high stakes this test represents. I saw despair on many faces.
My heart broke for one student who has been coming in regularly to work with me after school. He was determined to pass this test, and he knew that writing was not his strongest suit, so he asked for and received tutoring. Normally a gregarious one, when he came into class he could barely stand up straight. Shoulders slumped, head down, when I asked him if he was okay, he couldn't make eye contact with me or respond. I kept him after class, hoping to give him some encouragement, but all he could say was, "I just couldn't do it. I didn't even know how to start so I didn't finish."
For many of our third-world immigrants, the concept of a new technology is so foreign that they have a difficult time imagining it – much less constructing compelling arguments one way or another. Plainly and simply, this prompt is culturally insensitive to just about everyone.
It was a difficult day in a difficult year. My students and I have worked very hard to prepare for this test, and it is incredibly difficult to see their hope and high spirits shot down.
Did anyone else share this experience? In a middle-class venue, did the prompt work?