By Kristin
Dear Jim,
Your report wandered a bit, and I'm not sure where you got that fabulous "the same number went from here to there as there to here!" detail – the footnote didn't say.
If this paper had been written in my class, I probably would have conferenced with you, asked you to clarify, and encouraged you to work through a few more drafts. It's clear that you don't think the National Board bonus has done what it set out to do, and isn't worth any more money (shame on so many teachers for going after it, anyhow!), but your paper doesn't prove that to me.